people are crazy lyrics confidePlease give an opinion on these rap lyrics, its not mine by the way, my friend wrote it?

[Chorus] x2
I got a passion for you to see
I'm on the stage just being me
On the microphone actually
Holla now for your boy the MC

[Verse 1]
I got a lot of things pent up inside
So I let the beat ride and into it I confide
I've tried many things, but now I got it
I've spotted the passion ever since I started
Gaining support here and there, now and then
But now instead, my shape is getting bent
People saying this, and people saying that
What's real, what's fact? Get a doctor: stat
Cause lately I've been going so crazy
That I need a little more so I don't get lazy
If I hear the shout outs right about now
I know I'll make it through the bouts like pow
So if you're with me, you have to say it loud
Representing the P-Town, I say it proud!
I'm not being modest: but I'm being honest
I'm unbreakable: now that's a promise

[Chorus] x2
I got a passion for you to see
I'm on the stage just being me
On the microphone actually
Holla now for your boy the MC

[Verse 2]
Yesterday my brother pulled up in the Cheverolet
people are crazy lyrics confide We're never late, now those were the better days
Nowadays it's like me all in the house alone
You'd never think that I would call it home
So I retreat to the beats, to the pen and pad
Not saying my life is bad, but it gets me mad
Inside my mind are battles won over and fought
Then rewritten into thoughts then into rhymes so hot
That you ought to think that my mind's a furnace
I burn this nervous surface just for purpose
As I learn this, I learn things off the topic
Like though I'm a novice, I love getting polished
And I got this rawness energy from many weeks
I transform memories into transcending peaks
So if I speak like a geek, you know what it is
My roots, just truth. An A+ on every quiz

[Chorus] x2
I got a passion for you to see
I'm on the stage just being me
On the microphone actually
Holla now for your boy the MC

[Verse 3]
The only fan I've always had is on my ceiling
And the only chips I've had is because my paint is peeling
I don't talk about things I don't have
No coupes, can't hoop, only my speople are crazy lyrics confidewag
The one thing you can't take away from me
If you think I'll part with it eventually
Then you'll wait until I'm resting peacefully
And actually, factually you'll find me in the galaxy
Cause I'm a shining star, yup seen very far
I'm on par on these bars with flying cars
Something impossible, I'm embedded not topical
But definitely tropical and something nautical
Like I'm on a boat with much more to gloat
I float as I boast my cleanness like soap
I rope onto hope with passion like the Pope
When they stop I say nope and kick it like Citizen Cope

[Chorus] x2
I got a passion for you to see
I'm on the stage just being me
On the microphone actually
Holla now for your boy the MC
You don't have to lie man. You can just admit that you wrote. It wasn't that bad. It was alright.
Its straight, want another mc?
It was a decent 3 verses.